by KF5ZXT » Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:00 pm
Clearly, you are a bit off your game. Perhaps it's time to take a step back and write some new material before coming back. I'd pratice it a few times, to make sure it sounds as good out loud as it does in your head. Maybe even a collaborator is in need. Don't give up though, there is a small percentage that actually does succeed.